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  1. {RETIRED} XWiki Blog Application
  2. XABLOG-83

Incorrect English in "First blog post"

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    • Bug
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • Major
    • 1.14
    • 1.14
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      1. "Once you've clicked published once, you cannot unpublish a post."
      You would click "publish" not "published"
      also using "once" twice in a clause is a bit awkward.

      May I suggest: "Once you have clicked publish, you cannot unpublish a post."

      2. "A post can have one of the following statuses:"
      Though it is technically correct, the word "statuses" is very uncommon and it doesn't flow easily.

      May I suggest: "The status of a blog post may be any one of the following:"

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            sdumitriu Sergiu Dumitriu
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